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The following is an excerpt from near the end of my YA WIP. Quick scenario, girl loves boy and knows boy cares about her, but he's never used the "L" word. Not that it matters because they're expecting the story conflict to rip them apart very soon...
Without meaning
to, Jackson had taught me those things. When he was gone, my heart would need a
tremendous amount of recovery time. But when I was ready to love again, I’d
know better than to settle for anything less than what I deserved. That was his
gift to me.
“If I had the
chance to go back and do it all over again, I wouldn’t change anything,” I
said.
His look of
relief made me sad. It stung that he’d ever doubted me. I turned around and
settled back against his chest. It wasn’t his fault I’d fallen in love with him
when he warned me not to. He couldn’t possibly understand how I felt.
“I love you,
Reese.”
I froze. His
words were so soft I wondered if it wasn’t a trick of the wind.
“What did you
say?” I held my breath.
Jackson rested
his forehead on my shoulder, shielding his face. “I said . . . I love you.”
The weirdest
feeling exploded through my chest, spreading out from the center in waves. Until
they were spoken, I didn’t realize how badly I needed to hear those words. A bittersweet pang thumped with each beat of
my heart.
He turned his
head, skimming the hollow of my shoulder with his lips. Warm breath preceded
the brush of his kiss against my neck, setting off shivers of pleasure as he
whispered in my ear. “I love you.”
Three times. He’d
said those wonderful words not once, but three
times.
Happy Valentines Day Weekend!!
26 witty remarks:
Oh oh oh! I want to read the book!!!!!!!!
Awe, so sweet, Tracy!! And I love your quick scenerio recap. Hilarious!
~JD
This is just adorable! I have to know more about these two!
That was too sweet. And I loved it as a summary. Great job and thanks for participating!
love it! you can feel Reese's warmth as she absorbs his words.
This is too sweet. Love it! Have a great weekend!
This is beautiful... I'd love to get my hands on the book.
Awwww soooo awesome! I want to read more.
Wandered over from Robin's blog.
Intriguing bit you've shared. I too want to read more.
Three times! =D Awesome.
Oh my gosh!!! That is so sweet!!
hey- a fellow crusader taking part in the blogfest.
I love that it's all about how she's experiencing the words. By that I mean, all emotional nothing physical yet. Very cool.
Aww, so sweet. I'd love to read more.
How romantic! *SWOON*
Awwwwwwwwwh.... sweeet!
That was so sweet! The 'three times' that would have nailed it for me too :-D
Nice writing. Loved this
First/teen love can be the weirdest feeling in the world...
(and I wanted to mention I think I remember you from the Bransford forums last year. There CAN'T be more than one Oriole fan in the world...)
(just practicing my trash talk. :)
erica
Love the way you described her feelings. Definitely an intriguing snippet. I want to know more about their story!
- Liz
One of the few times I enjoy repetition. Well done!
Those last three lines were a great touch :D Fabulous! Thanks for sharing!
I love how she thinks he couldn't understand how she felt and then he's saying the words she's danced around in her head, like he can read her thoughts-- it makes them seem connected. This is a really sweet scene, but his warm breath brushing her skin before he places each kiss, phew! That's definitely sliding from sweet into steamy territory. And I love her voice at the end of this scene, her emphasis that he's said he loves her three whole times, it feels like an authentic teen girl swooning. Great job.
- Sophia.
Yay! Three times! :D This is a super entry. Thanks, Trace~ :o) <3
Fabulous snippet. Thanks for sharing it.
"Without meaning to, Jackson had taught me those things. When he was gone, my heart would need a tremendous amount of recovery time. But when I was ready to love again, I’d know better than to settle for anything less than what I deserved. That was his gift to me."
I love this!
Fantastic scene--very sweet :D
Very sweet, but you left me hanging! :) I'm late in reading the posts from the blogfest, but I finally made it. Keep writing!
Marie, http://marierearden.blogspot.com
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